Painting a Picture in the reader's head

WALT use our senses in our writing to paint a picture in the reader's head.

Here is an example of my writing. Can you imagine the scene in your head

I was in a scary dark forest with lots of snake in it. I heard some snake coming towards me. I was so scared. Also there were scary spiders crawling around me as well. So I ran away from it  and The sun came out all of the snakes and the spiders came out they all got somebody else, not me. He was so scared And then the spiders found him and they got on him and then he was dead.