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Friday 18 September 2020

we got happy today

 Today we got happy because we got a shout out form Kiwi kids news. Today I was so happy that we got one. It was the best day of my life. The class was so happy too when we got a shout out. My friends were so happy we that you got it today. We yelled out so loudly. We said, "Hey, hey, hey." lots of times. The teacher was recording it.  When we heard it we were excited.  

4 comments:

  1. Hello Jasmine.
    It's great to see that you have posted some of your learning.
    Just remember to read your work thoroughly to make sure that it makes sense before you post it.You made need to read it out loud or read it several times.

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  2. Hi jasmine Caitlin here. Love you blog post. Mabye next time you could re-read it, just to make shore it makes sense. other than that I think it was amazing💖🤩👍

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  3. Hello Jasmine.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.

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  4. Hi Jasmine it Esha. I'm Just saying I like your blog but maybe next time you should pouf read it to make it make sense well I do like it.

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