I like 100 word count writing. It is so fun at school. This is my 100 word count story to show you all. I hope you enjoy it.
week 7
It was a hot day at the beach and I wanted to get an ice cream at the shop near the beach. I drove to the ice cream shop and bought a chocolate ice cream and a drink, so delicious in my mouth. I went home to have a sleep for a while then I went rock climbing. There was a boy at the rocking climbing who was in trouble, "I'm trying to hold on", he shouted. "I feel like I have to go to the hospital because my leg is broken", he said. The ambulance came to get him.
Thursday 12 March 2020
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What a great story Jasmine.Well done. I liked that you had capital letters, full stops and speech marks for when someone was talking.
ReplyDeleteHave you ever been to the rock climbing centre in Christchurch?.I have heard it is quite fun. I don't like heights so I don't think I would be any good at it.
I look forward to hearing from you.