Friday, 1 May 2020
alligators
alligators live in a pond. They're so disgusting. it dirty you are not like to cuddle with them. be careful always they could chop your arm or something and they smell. and they're not cute day smell like rotten food.
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Good afternoon Jasmine. I certainly got the idea that you do not like alligators. They are unusual animals with their scaly skin and big eyes, you could have included an image of one to make your story more interesting. And no, I don't think I will try cuddling one. Claire
ReplyDeleteHi Jasmine. It's great to see you are using some full stops in your writing. It makes it so much easier to read. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteWell done Jasmine for showing some of your learning.Just remember to use a capital letter for the start of your sentences.I certainly wouldn't like to cuddle one.I think they would feel slimy and would wiggle too much.What do you think it would feel like to hug an alligator?.
ReplyDeleteHello Jasmine.
ReplyDeleteI just thought I would check to see if you had loaded any new learning to your blog.I look forward to see what other work you have been working on.I will check again soon.