I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, 14 May 2020
flowers
Flowers are so bright. The sun is shining on them. my name is called one of the flowers. call Jasmine. my grandma like flowers. she has a whole garden full of them. he has all the types of flowers.
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Hello Jasmine.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE flowers.Mine don't grow to well in the garden as I need to give them some better soil to live in.We also have a staff member at school who has the name of a flower as her first name.
Just remember to use capital letters for the beginning of your sentences.I can see you have done for some of your sentences but not all of them.
Thank you for sharing your flower facts.
Hello Jasmine.
ReplyDeleteI am checking all the blogs in room 10 tonight so I am leaving a comment to let you know that I have looked at your blog.Have a great week.
you get 20 points
ReplyDeleteHi Jasmine. It is great to see that you have found some information about flowers. Is Jasmine your grandmother's favourite flower. Remember to proofread your post before you publish.
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